Lily's Writing



Pumkins

 

Plump and

Unusually large with

Many

Puny

Kinds of seeds

In them.

Normally in orange,

Sometimes with a carved face

 




Comments

  1.    dreba1213 says:

    Lily,
    that is an incredible picture with a paint brush and paint. The poem was awesome. How did you come up with those amazing words and thoughts. It can be hard to guess and it can be easy to guess. cant wait to read your next post

    Posted October 24, 2011, 2:48 pm #      
  2.    elino1213 says:

    Lily, that was a great poem! I love the way it describes the pumpkins and doesn’t just talk about pumpkins in general. The painting was also very good. In the picture I liked how you put the pumpkins in a patch instead of a picture of a pumpkin. I also like how you did many pumpkins. Keep up the good posts Lily.

    Posted October 24, 2011, 2:51 pm #      

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